Su Yun: Three Poems
- Enheduana
- Mar 6
- 2 min read

Rain Window
Raindrops, escaping the wipers
Crystalize my window
Through this crystalline veil
I divine my destined path
Rising from the pondside path to the distance
Floating from the lifted wheat stalks to the village
Where churches and ancient houses stand
Where chimes echo and rain-kissed windows glisten
Starting from inside the house
Opening rain-drenched windows one by one
My footsteps unlike droplets from branches
Cannot create ripples in puddles
My silhouette unlike roadside grass
Cannot embrace the rain so wholly
Yet I long to push open one more rain window
Stepping into a new world.
Dream of Journey
Even when awakened
I still sway within the carriage
Moments ago
We journeyed away from our destination
No transition from asphalt to soil
No final tree before the turn
Only distant wild grass and patchwork paths
And the simplest things in the countryside
Yellow wheat, dry channels, and sycamore trees
Mountains not chosen, rivers not included
My heart finds peace on this journey
With a trustworthy driver and myself
We have a destined stop
Indeed, we pause in a new village street
Through the shopfronts, I see clearly
Banquets of strangers under the lights
Meeting friends from my hometown
In an instant
We begin our return, I guard time closely
Bidding farewell to friends, offering banquet wishes
And the ordinary fields along the way
Sparkling before my wandering eyes
I strive to memorize all I see
As it swiftly fades into distance
I've always known I'm dreaming
Walking an endless road
Yet filled with familiar matter
Until I open my eyes, beginning to miss
All that I left behind there
Never to return but emerges hazily.
Mountain Tears
Behold the unwithered
Not clinging to life through affliction
But growing true to their nature
Should winds assail the slopes
They stand, unwavering shields
Observe the withered
Not untimely perished
But exiting with rhythmic grace
Should rains pierce the soil
They face fragmentation fearlessly
Perhaps a desiccated tree's millennia-old lament
Swallows the mountain's verdant stoicism
Perhaps a lone grassroots future ember
Ignites the ground's seasonal unfurling
Ultimately, your chiseled facade
Erodes, bearing your mournful whispers
Your preserved tears
No longer seek recompense
For the droplets shed adorning trees and igniting grass

Su Yun , Whose real name is Chen Ruizhe, he is a 16-year-old poet. He is the member of the Chinese Poetry Society. His works have been published in more than ten countries, including the poetry collections "Spreading All Things" and "Wise Language Philosophy" in China, and the poetry collection "WITH ECSTASY OF MUSING IN TRANQUILITY" in India. He won the 2024 Guido Gozzano Apple Orchard Award in Italy.
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